Wednesday, January 30, 2013

My Favorite Books: All Creatures Great & Small

Way, way, okay, waaaay back when I was but a lad, I liked to read a lot of different types of books. I read middle grade, young adult, history, historical fiction, fantasy, science fiction, comedy--everything except romance, ugh!

When I was about 13 or so, my mother's cousin started mailing us books every once in a while. She was the original Amazon.com, only I didn't order the books, she just sent whatever she thought I'd be interested in. There was just one problem--she had no idea what I liked to read. I don't think she asked my mom, she certainly didn't ask me. I couldn't really tell her what I liked because these gifts were just sent randomly, and if I asked her for a book it would seem like I expected to receive one.

To be honest, I don't remember any of the books that she sent me. Except the ones by Alf Wight, a/k/a James Herriot. For some strange reason, I found I really liked these books about an English country vet. I think looking back it was because the books took me back to another time and place--Yorkshire in the 1940's and 50's with such vivid descriptions. Each chapter was a little individual story that dealt with universal truths about human and animal nature.

Cast of All Creatures Great and Small
I had become something of an Anglophile by that time. Many of the authors I was reading were English--J.R.R. Tolkien, C.S. Lewis, and others. My entertainment was also decidedly Anglo-centric. I had just discovered Monty Python--don't get me started about Monty Python! Genius. My music was also dominated by English bands--Yes, Bowie, and the most English band of all--Jethro Tull. Some of their songs from the mid to late 70's were snapshots of the Yorkshire countryside.

All this combined to fuel my imagination of that green and pleasant land that English poet William Blake wrote about (sorry, English major in me coming out). Then lo and behold, while flipping channels one night (yes, those were the days when you actually had to get up and turn the knob), I chanced upon All Creatures Great and Small on PBS.

Alf Wight a/k/a James Herriot
Well, I was hooked all over again. The beautiful locations, the use of live animals on set (lots of shots of the actors sticking their hands up cows' butts), and the fact that they did all this in suits(!?), appealed to me. I loved seeing beloved characters and animals brought to life. It was awesome. So much so, that even today I love rereading the books, and my whole family likes listening to "vet stories" as the kids call the audio books and the DVDs.

So, thank you Cousin Kathy for giving me a gift that really did keep on giving. If you have children in your life, I heartily support the notion of sending them random gifts of books. You never know. You just might open up a door to a whole world of entertainment!

Monday, January 28, 2013

Monday Sneak Peek

Today, I thought I'd give you a sneak peek at the first chapter of my next book, The Deliverers 2: Order of the Crystal Lion. It's my hope that the book will be released sometime in March, but it might be a little later than that, depending on art and layout.

This is the first part of the chapter. I'll share the rest of it in a future post. There might be a few edits still to be made, but I don't anticipate any major changes at this point. So, without further ado, here's the beginning of chapter one. Please let me know what you think. Enjoy!

The Deliverers 2: Order of the Crystal Lion

Chapter 1--Back in the Saddle Again

            Bam! Eric Scott’s face was smashed into the Plexiglas that ringed the skating rink.
            “Hey, where’d you learn to play hockey, Dork Magazine?” the larger of the two boys who had run into him said.
            Eric glared at them. They were his cousins, Jeff and Gordy Bungee, and they had been playing hockey almost since they could walk. Eric, on the other hand, could barely skate.
            “Oh yeah? I’d rather be reading than banging into walls!”
             “All right, enough jawing, ladies!” a dark haired, heavyset man yelled from behind the bench. “Let’s get back to practice! Eric, come here.”
            Eric skated over to the bench. The big man leaned over the railing.
            “Eric, what’re you thinking? You can’t let anyone check you like that. You’ve gotta be tough. When someone tries to check you into the boards, give them an elbow or something. Let them know you won’t take that kind of stuff. Now get back out there, and don’t let me see you getting pushed around anymore.”
            “Okay, Uncle Rocco,” Eric said. What did he want him to do, he thought, beat them over the head with his stick? He could barely stand in these stupid skates.
            His Uncle Rocco was coach of his cousins’ hockey team, the Slayers. He did not like hockey, really, but his mother had asked his uncle to add him to the team. She thought he needed more of a male influence. He’d been without one since his father had died more than a year and a half ago.
            Now, he skated unsteadily out to center ice, where the other boys were working on their passing.
            Eric tried to get into the drill, but when someone passed him the puck, it either went under his stick or he sent it in the opposite direction of where he wanted it to go.
            “Why am I doing this?” Eric muttered, as yet another pass skidded under his stick and slid down to the far end of the ice.
            “C’mon Eric!” Uncle Rocco yelled. “Head up, stick down!”
            Eric sighed as he slowly skated to retrieve the puck. He was bowled over by Gordy, who beat him to it.
            “Enough with the drills, let’s scrimmage!” Gordy yelled.
            “All right,” Uncle Rocco called back. “Let’s see what you boys‘ve got. Starters versus scrubs!”
            Gordy and Jeff were starters, and skated to one side of the ice. Eric made his way to join the scrubs on the other side.
            Gordy waited for the faceoff across from a smaller, skinnier boy. All of the scrubs were on the scrawny side, Eric noted, including himself. When Uncle Rocco dropped the puck, Gordy was on it like a flash, sending a perfect pass over to Jeff, who was streaking down ice. Eric, following him on the wing, tried his best to keep up with him. But after a few seconds, his heavy breathing had fogged up his face shield, and he could not see a thing.
            Man, how embarrassing, he thought as he tried to see through the fog. His attempts to see were unsuccessful, and he slammed into the boards.
            “No, no, no!” He heard Uncle Rocco scream. “What’s the matter with you, Eric? Are you blind?”
            “Yeah, kinda,” he said, pulling off his bulky hockey glove and running his bare hand across the inside of his visor to clear it.
            Just at that moment, something hit him in the head. Looking down, he saw the puck laying a couple of feet away from him on the ice. Excited, he turned toward it—and was slammed headfirst into the boards by Jeff.
            He lay there on the ice, feeling like a rag doll. Lifting his head slightly, he saw Uncle Rocco standing over him, flanked by his two cousins. His uncle was shaking his head. Then, Eric blacked out.
           
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            Eric was still a bit lightheaded on the trip home in his uncle’s SUV. Luckily, his helmet had absorbed most of the impact. He looked out the window at the winter scenery zipping by, but had to turn away when the movement started making him feel nauseous.
            “Man, for a second there, I thought you were dead,” Jeff said, chuckling from the seat next to him.
            “What?” Eric asked.
            “At the rink. You were laid out on the ice for, like, five minutes.”
            “Yeah,” Gordy said from the front seat. “I thought Jeff killed you for sure.”
            “Enough, boys,” Uncle Rocco said. “You did okay for your first time, Eric. You took a hard hit, but we’re not going to let that stop you. You’re a Bungee, and Bungees bounce back.”
            “He didn’t bounce back this time. He went splat!” Jeff said, laughing.
            “Shut up!” Eric snapped. “I’m not playing hockey anymore. And I’m a Scott, not a Bungee!”
            “You’re my sister’s son, and that makes you at least half a Bungee,” his uncle said. “It’s my job to make sure you do bounce back. You’ve had a tough break losing your dad and all, but I’m going to do my best to help you forget all that.”
            “I don’t want to forget about it!” Eric yelled, then sank back in his seat as flares erupted in his skull. “I’ll never forget my dad,” he murmured, but no one seemed to have heard.
I wish Stig was here, he thought. Then I could have some fun. Eric had made some new friends, some very different new friends this past summer. He’d met them on an incredible adventure that he still didn’t quite believe had been real.
A talking owl named Stig had taken him on something called an Assignment on another world. There, he’d had an adventure and wound up saving an entire world. He also realized that the accident that had killed his father had not been his fault.
When he had returned home, the feelings of guilt that had plagued him were gone. He was happy, or mostly happy. Then, his mother had decided that he needed to go and “hang out with boys.” She thought he spent too much time inside reading, or drawing. So she’d asked his Uncle Rocco to include him in some “male activities.”
The hockey disaster was just one of many. He just wasn’t an athlete, but what could he do? He couldn’t tell his mother, she’d just worry. So for now, he had to put up with it.
What he really wanted was to go on another Assignment. All through the fall, he’d looked for a sign, but none had come. He was beginning to think his friends had forgotten about him. He wished he could see them again. He needed them.
“I miss you guys,” he said in a whisper, as closed his eyes and laid his head back against the headrest.
So it was that he missed the large snowy white owl that flew in front of the car.
“Woa!” Gordy said, “Did you see that?”
“Yeah, that was some bird,” Uncle Rocco said.
“What was it?” Jeff asked.
“I think it was an owl,” Uncle Rocco replied.
Eric’s eyes snapped open and he sat straight up in his seat.
“A white owl?” he asked.
“Yeah, I think so,” his uncle said. “It just flew across the road.”
Eric looked out his side window, but could not see anything. Could it be…he wondered.

Friday, January 25, 2013

A Writer's Week #55: The Road Less Traveled

One of the harsh realities of being an independent author (aka Indie) is that it's tough to make a go of it on your own. When I set out on this journey over a year ago, I knew this full well. I chose the path I have taken and I accept it. I could have gone the regular route, tried to get an agent to look at my work, waited to hear from them, then once I've secured said agent, waited for them to cast about for a publisher.

Photo by Jody S. Cipot. Check out all his photos
 at  Photography By Jody
Unfortunately, that's not me. For better or for worse, I'm just not patient enough. I'd rather be moving forward than standing around waiting, even if I wind up getting no further in the end. My favorite analogy is I'd rather drive the back roads than be sitting around waiting in traffic, even if I wind up getting there later. It feels like I'm doing something.

I also can't sit back and trust that things will work out in the end, leaving things in someone else's hands. I've got to be in control. Control freak and impatient--bad combination. Still, I think in the long run, I'll be happy with the choice I've made.

I've learned a lot along the road, and met many fantastic people. I think I'm better able to multi-task. Before, I would have stopped at one book and worked to get published. I needed that closure before starting another project. Now, I've published one book, have an audio book that was just released, a second book in final editing and production, and a third book that's almost a quarter done. Wow, tires me out just typing that!

The fact is, I never would have grown so much if I'd decided to take the traditional route. I may have been more successful monetarily, but then again, maybe not. All I know is I am enjoying the ride, although sometimes I still doubt myself. After all, it's hard to do any kind of marketing with little or no money, but I do the best I can. Sometimes when sales are slow (i.e. after Christmas) it bothers me that I don't have the marketing power of a publisher behind me, but thanks to the support of people like you, I know that the next sales run is just around the corner.

I wonder if there's a door in this drainpipe...photo by Jody S. Cipot
In the meantime, I'll keep moving forward with all my projects. Let me tell you, it's never dull. That's the reason why I love it so much. Thanks again for all your support. I can't begin to express how much it means to me.

Now, on to the weekly writing update. I hit my goal of 2,000 words this week. The Deliverers 3: The Golden Dragon of Ang, now stands at 12,000 words, 55 pages, and 11 chapters. The Deliverers 2: Order of the Crystal Lion is still waiting for a cover. I'm also waiting for the last of my test readers to give me their opinions/suggestions. I was gratified to hear from one this week that said book 2 is "amazing", and that it kept her guessing all the way through, and all of her guesses turned out to be wrong! I love that.

Sales of the audio book in its first week of release have been a little slower than anticipated. I had hoped that the audio book listening community at Audible and Amazon would have checked it out. I think it suffered a little due to the fact that the category Audible originally placed it in was Teens 11-13  scifi/fantasy. I've had a word with them, and just yesterday they moved it to Kids 8-10 scifi/fantasy, which I think is more appropriate both from a story and a performance standpoint. We'll see how that works out. I'll update you again next week!

Wednesday, January 23, 2013

What's Abigail Reading? Amber Brown is Tickled Pink

Abigail continued on her reading blitz this past week. I'm really proud and pleased with the way her reading has increased since heading back to school after the holidays. I think she's actually starting to enjoy her evening reading time. Great to see!

This week, Abigail was reading  Amber Brown is Tickled Pink, by Bruce Coville & Elizabeth Levy. Here's what she had to say about it.

This is what Abigail says the book is about.

"It’s about a girl named Amber. Amber’s mom is getting married to a guy named Max. They decide to have a tiny wedding at Camp Sukatteutt. Then Amber’s mom and Aunt Pam helps Amber pick out a dress. It is hard to pick out a dress because she doesn’t like any of them. Then Amber has to pack because she is spending the weekend with her father for the weekend and they are going to stay at the Plaza hotel. Amber’s dad said that they are going to see a Broadway musial, so then Amber got really excited because she was going to her first Broadway musical.

"When they were leaving to go drop Amber off back at her house she saw the perfect dress that she could wear to her mom’s wedding. Her dad saw it without telling Amber and said that he would buy it for her so then they went into the store and tried it on and it fit so then he bought it for her. Then they drove back home.

"Then when they were all finished they drive home to meet Max and pick him up. Max, Aunt Pam, Amber’s mom, and Amber drive in a car to Max’s grandmother’s and grandfather’s house. Their name was Rose and Herman. Rose and Herman were in the band that played for Max’s and Amber’s mom’s wedding. When they got to Rose and Herman’s house they played a little tune for them and then they all started to dance. Then Max, Aunt Pam, Amber’s mom and Amber drove to Camp Sukatteutt to see how they did for decorating and fixing the camp for Amber’s mom’s and Max’s wedding. Then the wedding came and finally Amber’s mom got remarried."

Here's what Abigail liked most about the book.

"I liked when they went to the Plaza, because I went to the Plaza once and I liked seeing it."

Was there anything she didn't like?

"I didn’t like when her mother got upset with her because Amber’s father got her the dress and it reminded her of her ex-husband."

So, how did Abigail rate  Amber Brown is Tickled Pink, by Bruce Coville & Elizabeth Levy?

She gives it four out of five dolphins!

Monday, January 21, 2013

Monday Interview Series: The Boy Who Cried Wolf

This week we've got a very special guest, Mr. Harry Potter! Ha, got you! No, we couldn't get Harry. I was fibbing. Well, okay, lying actually. Sorry, but I just couldn't help myself. You see, our guest today is one of the most famous liars of all time. I'm talking of course about the Boy Who Cried Wolf.

Greg:  Hello and welcome. It's very nice to have you here.

Boy:  It's very nice to be here. Funny you should mention Harry Potter because he and I are very good friends.

Greg:  You are? Well, that's strange. I hadn't heard anything about that.

Boy:  Oh yes, always we're hanging out together. I'd go up to Hogwarts to spend the holidays with him, he comes over to the field to help keep the wolves at bay. He's a real wizard with a wand is Harry. Big help when it comes to frightening away wolves and all.

Greg:  Really? That seems a bit far fetched to me. You're not just making that up are you?

Boy:  Oh no, no. Well, yes, a bit. You got me. Me and Harry aren't as close as all that. In fact, um, he doesn't really know me. But I'm a big fan of his. Well, that's not strictly true. To be totally honest, I've never met him, just thought it'd be fun if he were my friend, that's all. It's just a harmless bit of fun.

Greg:  Do you lie like this often?

Boy:  No, not often. Oh, well probably more than your average boy, but that doesn't necessarily mean often. You might say I don't tell the truth somewhere between frequently and often.

Greg:  But why?

Boy:  Why? Why? Because I'm the Boy Who Cried Wolf, that's why. I mean, what else am I supposed to do?

Greg:  Well, it's just that I though the incident with the wolves would have discouraged you from any further lying. I thought that was the whole moral of the story.

Boy:  Oh it was. Sure, obviously. That was the whole moral of thee story. Tell too many lies, and no one will believe you when you're telling the truth, blah, blah, blah. All very true. No one should ever lie. I want to stress that in no uncertain terms. But it's just not me. Try as I might, I just can't stop lying. 

Greg:  But why?

Boy:  Because I'm the Boy Who Cried Wolf. I can't do anything else. It's in my nature, I suppose. I tried telling the truth. I really did. But it's just so much fun to make things up. People get so upset. It's funny, I tell you.

Greg:  Hmmm. It doesn't sound funny. You can really get people into trouble by lying, not to mention yourself.

Boy:  Too true, too true. I know. I witnessed that firsthand, but I still can't help myself. I've tried everything, clinics, medicine, shock treatment. Nothing works.

Greg:  Really?

Boy:  No, not really. I'm lying again. I admit it. Boy, you're easy.

Greg:  I guess that brings our discussion to an end. Too bad, because I really enjoyed myself. You're fascinating to talk to.

Boy:  Well, that's very nice of you to say.

Greg:  Well guess again, because I was lying!

Boy:  I'm shocked. Really? How deflating.

Greg:  No, not really. I lied about lying. It's really been a lot of fun.

Boy:  That's good, because I didn't want both of us to be lying about enjoying ourselves.